Brief
Create a set of between six and ten finished images on the theme of the decisive moment. You may choose to create imagery that supports the tradition of the ‘decisive moment’ or you may choose to question or invert the concept by presenting a series of ‘indecisive’ moments. Your aim isn’t to tell a story, but in order to work naturally as a series there should be a linking theme, whether it’s a location, event or particular period of time.
Include a written introduction to your work of between 500 and 1000 words outlining your initial ideas and subsequent development. You’ll need to contextualise your response with photographers that you’ve looked at, and don’t forget to reference the reading that you’ve done.
Introduction
After completing the Research Point for part 3 I decided that I wanted to approach the assignment though the traditional sense of the decisive moment. I felt that by doing this I would throw myself out of my comfort zone given my aversion to taking pictures of people I don’t know.
In my Planning and Research, I found John Sulers’ elements of the decisive moment very useful when trying to identify those elements in the images of Vivian Maier.
So in “true Henri Cartier-Bresson style”, I did not go looking for the DM shot, but focused on a subset of the elements described by Suler and Cartier-Bresson.
“You can’t go looking for it; you can’t want it, or you want get it. First you must lose your self. Then it happens” Henri Cartier-Bresson , American Photo , Page: 96 (September/October 1997)
My first attempts proved both frustrating and challenging but overall very helpful.
I needed a high shutter speed which was an issue, but not as challenging as being able to see, and then take the shot in a split second. I had very few issues with people noticing me or my camera which was a great relief!

Although I took images in colour, I preferred most of them in black and white. I wanted to compare them directly with Maier’s and Cartier-Bresson’s images, which were all in black and white. Planning and Research
I selected shots that I felt had some of Sulers’ elements but I had to rotate and crop a few of them due to some innacuracies that resulted from the need to click the shutter without having the time to check if the framing was straight.

fig.6 Not framed well. Too much space at the top. In hindsight I think her shoes would have made a better image! (see fig.6a)

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fig.7 Unfortunately the main subjects are out of focus. But I was pleased with the the shot in respect of the wording on the bridge in light of the couples embrace.

fig.8 I cropped this shot to help me focus on Sulers’ features of ambiguity, uncertainty curiosity and emotion. I think this would fall into the category of unique, fleeting and meaningful moment as well.

fig.9 This couple were just too quick for me and I didn’t get Suler’s anticipation, of completion and closure. I would have prefered the moment before the kiss, but I was still happy with the inbuilt caption on the bridge

fig.10 This is the shot I liked the most. The curved pavement indicates where he has come from, he has left the crowds behind. It is curious and perhaps ambiguous because he is the only one wearing a dress suit. The hotdog is a bit of a surprise too in light of what his appearance. Emotion and meaning coming from his posture and expression as he takes his first bite. His posture matches the curve of the pavement. The man in the background on the right and the post on the left helps to frame him in the shot. It is a candid unobtrusive shot (I was quite a long way away from him). I believe it goes someway to being a DM in the true sense.

fig.11. Another cropped shot to help me focus on Sulers feature of ambiguity and contradiction.

fig.12 The legs of the walker next to the bench match the legs of the two subjects giving the shot some horizontal rhythm. It looks like perhaps someone is missing from the scene. They are both looking slightly to the left, has the person wondered off?
I was quite pleased with some of the images and feel they fit Suler’s and Cartier -Bresson’s elements well, with several of them fitting more then one. Most of them had an element of luck and coincidence which is consistent with the Cartier Bresson DM, and demonstrate an ability to see that was pleasing.
My ability to control the camera quickly was an issue in respect of focus and stability but I can work on this for the next set. I don’t know if any of these will make the final cut for the assessment, but I definitely prefer most of them in black and white. I think the only one that looks better in colour is the lady on the wall. (fig 6)
Colour versions below
My next few days produced some of the following shots.

Again I selected shots that I felt had one or more of Sulers’ elements

fig.13 The viewer is drawn by the girls gaze down to the boy sitting with his head down. It is an interesting image because it is difficult to understand what the dynamic is between the two subjects. This could come under curiosity, emotional. Have they had an argument? or are they just chatting?

fig.14 I really liked this shot. They are not engaging with each other. They both look like they are wistfully thinking about other things that they could be doing if they weren’t trapped together in a glass box! There is also the reflection giving a suggestion of someone coming between them. I watched them for a few minutes and in reality they were very engaged with each other and chatting all the time. I just caught a moment that shows something completely different. I think this image might include Suler’s features of Visual Coalescence, Figure/Ground relationships, Curiosity, Fleeting moment, Candid, Meaning and Emotion.
I took a few pictures of the couple (fig14a and fig.14b) and decided to waited for some passers by to see if this would add anything. It did – and I appear to have concocted a whole story around them!

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fig 15 A disaster in the making! The two boats in the back ground look like they are being drawn into the V produced by the two boats in the foreground as they hit each other. The man standing on the back of the left hand boat appears to be trying to keep his balance and we will never know if he fell in or if the other boats joined the mayhem. I think this would come under the element of Anticipation.

fig.16 This shot suggests the feature Ambiguity and Curiosity. How can three people on bikes be so close to each other? Why are the at such different heights and in such a straight line? (and still be laughing) They were in fact on one bike that had an adult seat at the back, older and younger child seats, middle and front. They also seem to be on quite a slant so maybe a bit of anticipation of a fall too!

fig.17 I waited quite some time for something or someone interesting to pass by. I think I took the shot a fraction after I should. The person with the umbrella should have been more to the right and not directly in front of the white down pipe which is breaking up her silhouette. An earlier shot would also have lost the man coming into shot on the left. I did a very quick clean up and crop to get a better idea of how it could have looked if I had got the timing just right. (see fig.17a)

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fig.18 I liked the composition of this shot with the building on the left and the trees on the right. The fence leads the eye to the steps which take the viewer down to the water and back round. The person standing by the building on the left may only be seen on the second time round. I don’t think this is particularly a DM shot, but as I was looking for geometrically balanced images as part of Suler’s features I have included it.
Colour versions below
Final Selection
The brief asks for between 6 and 10 shots on the theme of the decisive moment, that work naturally as a series.

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I’m not sure that Img.18 helps them be a cohesive set? It’s different from the other images in a couple of ways: it doesn’t include people and it was the only image I took without looking through the viewfinder. I pointed the camera towards the river from a bridge and was surprised that I managed to get a shot without any people in it as the river was awash with boats full of people! But I like the loneliness of the bench with the discarded cup!
I have to admit that I was not at all comfortable taking pictures of people in the street at the beginning of this assignment but I ended enjoying the process although I did get a few negative vibes from people. In the main people don’t seem to care or just didn’t see me.
I chose a long lens which I thought would produce close images without me getting so close that people would notice. The lens didn’t attract attention but it gave me a shallow depth of field on occasion which I hadn’t fully taken into account when selecting it. Perhaps, if i feel brave enough, I will venture out another time with a 50 or 80mm prime lens.
The assignment has given me a much better understanding of the concept of “The Decisive Moment” and without doubt this part of the course has taught me a lot about my camera, my technical skills and my ability “to see”.
I have also come to understand that there is a great deal going on around me that sometimes it’s worth taking notice of rather than trying to filter it all out. My tendency to always be looking for abstract images may have been stopping me from truly “seeing”.
At the end of my planning for this assignment, I wrote:
“Going through this process has really helped me to understand what I need to be able to achieve in order to try and capture a DM shot in the Cartier-Bresson sense, whilst also taking Sulers’ psychological elements into account.
I need some luck, be able to see what is going on, what is about to happen, what the composition and background are giving and the skills to take the shot at the right time. How intuitive this will all be I have no idea!”
I did have some luck, and I was able to identify opportunities that might provide interesting interaction if I waited. How much of this was intuitive, I am still not sure.
I was surprised at how few images I took, which must mean that I was not just clicking away madly hoping for good shot, but seeing the shot coming together and clicking at the right, or almost the right, time.
Looking back at the brief I think I have produced imagery that supports the tradition of the “decisive moment” and that goes some way to working naturally as a series.
Re-worked material after feedback from tutor
After receiving the Tutor feedback for this assignment we decided that I would re take the images. Rather than being disappointed with this decision, I was quite sure it was the right one.
My tutor suggested that the images were a little safe and that they needed an element of surprise or be more surreal. He did say that I had achieved some peak moments and had a go at architectural framing but sometimes the shots are overwhelmed by unintentional random elements. He suggests that I go for simpler backgrounds and also opt for a 28mm lens which will afford more drama even though I will have to get closer. He also asks that I explain why I decided to convert to black and white and to have a defined subject. I converted to black and white in order to keep with the classic Cartier-Bresson decisive moment. I think I need to make sure the elements are right in colour and black and white.
In order to try and get the shots I need we discussed finding a location that was less “safe” (not in a physical way), a location that is a bit more gritty.
It had taken quite a bit of reading and research for me to start to get an understanding of the meaning of the phrase “The Decisive Moment” in a way that would allow me to fulfil the brief for the assignment and in hindsight I do believe I have understood it up to a point. I really wanted to try and get more of a feel for it and one thing that occurred to me was that the iconic image that always pops up ? is one that I don’t particularly find easy to look at and found very hard to break down into the elements that cover the traditional Decisive Moment. I think I found this quite worrying initially. Wasn’t this supposed to be the quintessential iconic image?
Spending a day doing more reading, looking at other photographers and their Decisive Moments and generally trying to figure out what I was missing I realised that I may have overanalysed and made this all far too complicated. I had also forgotten to take into account the fact that the iconic image had been taken in ? and actually for its time was quite amazing. I still find it uncomfortable to look at but have discovered a new respect and understanding.
One image that I really felt epitomised The Decisive Moment for me was found during my day of discovery. Fig.1

Fig.1 Stuart Franklin, (1986) Manchester UK
The photograph, by British photographer Stuart Franklin, taken in 1986 in Moss Side Manchester stood out for me in so many ways. My first thoughts were how easy it was to look at. I noticed how my eye followed from left to right along the mattresses, then followed the boy climbing onto the container, making a triangle with the two boys on the top. My eye then moved to the boy standing then behind the boy jumping and then onto the boy who has jumped off, where it continued down onto the mattress and back round again. My eyes followed the probably trajectory of the boy, even though he is in mid air. The boy in the foreground seems to be in a world of his own, and although I feel he probably should have been one the first thing I noticed, he didn’t really get all my attention until I had gone round the loop a few times. Is he not interested in jumping off the container, has he done it and is now bored with it, is he not part of the group at all and has not been invited to join in? He seems to have found something far more interesting!There is so much in this image that works to make it a decisive moment!
The boy jumping off the container is almost “flying” he is very much in a “superman’ pose totally in contrast to the boy in the foreground. It is a beautifully balanced and intriguing image, all the elements coming together at one precise moment.
I decided to compare this to Cartier Bressons iconic image and it has so many similar elements. The boy flying through the air having just left the top of the container and the man jumping, about to land. The boy on the bike, seemingly in his own world compares to the man in Cartier Bressons image who seems to be facing the other way, oblivious of the man running and jumping. The questions around what he is doing and why are also the same for him and the boy on the bike.
I do find it hard sometimes to describe why i like or dislike an image. It is more a feeling than words. When it happens with my own images, I often don’t know why they do or do not feel right but it is something I am aware of and need to learn to take note of.
Whilst looking at images that fit the idea of a decisive moment it struck me again that it would be impossible for me to get 6-8 images that were perfect Decisive Moments. I think the point that my tutor was trying to get across was that I had missed some of the more crucial ideas such as the backgrounds.
The cover-19 pandemic has made it harder to go out and take images on the street for the time being. I’m not sure if I need to find another way of capturing the images or if I should wait until things relax a bit more. Things have relaxed a bit more in the last few weeks and we are now able to go out more than once a day for exercise.
I wondered if it would be possible to complete the re worked assignment without going out into the streets and spent some more time looking at what might be possible inside. There isn’t really that much movement inside my house as such but there is quite a lot of change. If things are changing then there has to be movement. If I look at how things change over time rather than in a split second or moment, then this might be more achievable inside.
In a previous Zoom EYV meet-up my tutor had discussed the indecisive moment to help students continue to work on the assignment during lockdown. By going back and looking again at the slides for this presentation, I was hoping to get a better understanding of the indecisive moment and perhaps find a more creative way to tackle this re work. Looking back at the slides used in the presentation, it struck me that there were a few images that I would have dismissed at the start of this course. The set “Washing Up” by Nigel Shafran (2000) and “Cup of Tea” by Martin Parr.
“Washing up” Nigel Shafran (2000)
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“Tea Cup” Martin Parr

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I think I would have dismissed them through my inability to understand them. I’m not saying I fully understand them and the meaning behind them but I do “get” why a photograph of something ordinary and mundane can be quite beautiful. I am a person who does tend to see the unusual in the usual but I guess I don’t think that other people would be interested in it just because I am! Is it a personal thing or something to share that other people might appreciate? During this pandemic lock-down lots of things have changed for me and my partner and our daily lives, but lots of things haven’t. I think I am noticing the “mundane” everyday things around us more. I don’t believe this is because I am less busy. The fact is I am far more busy due to trying to keep a business going when the pandemic has put in place regulations that have completely stopped it in its tracks! It may be because I have to be super organised with things like food shopping and planning to allow me to keep to the recommendations, carry on trying to save the business and try and fit in my photography study. By having to be super organised I am noticing things that I was aware of but perhaps not conscious of. The biggest aspect of this seems to be around food and drink. Planning food for two weeks so that I don’t have to shop too often and patterns in what we do on a daily basis that hadn’t had a chance to evolve into or be noticed as patterns because they weren’t happening everyday. Cups of tea, Breakfast, coffee, lunch, Cups of tea, snack, (News update), dinner, snack.
Our similarities and differences seem to be evolving through our food and drink. (just to add to this reality – my partner has just said to me “is it time for a cup of tea?” it’s 15:38 so according to the above then yes it is!). We, like many other people do not normally spend the whole day in each others company and eating and drinking are very often at the mercy of of other events and commitments and usually do not happen at the same time every day. The pattern that has evolved has done so because of the pandemic.
So – a new plan for indoor (In)decisive Moment images.
I immediately took a couple of shots of the cups of tea and the first thing I decided was that they have to be at a focal length that is similar to that of the human eye! When I took the shots I just picked up my camera without thinking about the lens. I had been using a macro lens which didn’t give me what I wanted. I realised that I wanted the shots to look like the viewer themselves were in the kitchen looking at our cups of tea. This seems far more appropriate. I want them to give a sense of intimacy. This was going to require a 50mm lens. I also thought that there needed to be some pattern in the shots to give a feeling of the rather mundane aspect of (normal) food and drink over the period of a couple of days and at different times of the day. Nigel Shafran took some of his images at different times of the day thus giving very differently lit images. Thinking about the images I would be taking (Cups of tea – morning, breakfast – morning – coffee – morning, lunch, cups of tea – afternoon, dinner, cups of tea evening), I realised that if I did this over 3 or 4 days I would have far too many images for the assignment but if I were to create merged composite images or images that are a composite of more than one, this might give the feeling of the passing of time which would work nicely for the idea of duration. This is in contrast to the fleeting split second of the Decisive Moment. I hope this will also show a creative side to understanding the concept of the (In)Decisive Moment
I decided to Look more closely at Martin Parrs work and in particular his images of food and drink.
Martin Parr is a British documentary and photojournalist. Born in 1952 his intimate portrayal of modern life documented the social classes. I discovered that the “Cup of Tea” image was actually part of a large body of work called “Common Sense”, 350 images taken between 1995 and 1999 in the UK and abroad (Fig. 14). The images are tightly framed and have a very saturated colour. The Tate website describes them as depicting “images of global consumerism in tight close-up and lurid colour” and being “designed to be displayed in a horizontal grid of at least three images by four. The artist has specified that it is not necessary to display all the photographs in the series when the work is shown. The selection of images can be arbitrary” (Tate)

Fig. 14 Martin Parr (1995 – 1999) “Common Sense”
“Common Sense was first shown in 1999 as an exhibition staged simultaneously in forty-one venues in seventeen countries. This organisational feat earned Parr a Guinness World Record. To coincide with the exhibitions Parr produced a book, also called Common Sense, in which 158 images from the series were reproduced” (Tate)
I picked out some of his food and drink images:
- Fig.18 Martin Parr GERMANY. Munich. 1997.
- Fig.19 Martin Parr 1998 USA. Florida. From ‘Common Sense’. 1998
- Fig.20 Martin Parr G.B. ENGLAND. Blackpool. 1994.
- Fig.21 Martin Parr G.B. ENGLAND. London. 1997.
- Fig.22 Martin Parr ARGENTINA. Buenos Aires. 1998.
- Fig.23 Martin Parr 1998 SPAIN. Benidorm. From ‘Common Sense’. 1998
- Fig.24 Martin Parr 1998 GB. England. Weston Super Mare. From ‘Common Sense’. 1998
- Fig.25 Martin Parr 1998 GB. England. Weymouth. From ‘Common Sense’. 1998
- Fig.26 Martin Parr 1998 JAPAN. Tokyo. From ‘Common Sense’. 1998
- Fig.27 Martin Parr 1998 GB. England. Weymouth. From ‘Common Sense’.1998
- Fig. 28 Martin Parr 1998 GB. England. Weymouth. From ‘Common Sense’. 1998
One of the words that struck a chord with me during the feedback was “Surreal” I decided I wanted to go back to John Suler who had a piece on surreal photography that was really interesting.
One of the words that struck a chord with me during the feedback was “Surreal” I decided to go back to John Suler who had a piece on surreal photography that I had found really interesting and see if I can get some inspiration.
He describes some the features of surreal images
- Intense sharpness, detail, and contrast
- Intensified and unusual texture
- Intensified and unusual colour
- Composites and blendings
- Frozen movement
- Perceptual distortions and illusions
- Strange juxtapositions
- Primitive content
Looking back at my final set of images I wondered if any of the above features were contained in any of them.
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I remember thinking that it was a bit surprising that someone dressed so smartly should be seen eating a hotdog in public. So could this come under strange juxtapositions?

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I think this has come from the same idea as above where is surprising to see someone dressed so smartly with a cigarette hanging out of her mouth. Perhaps another strange juxtapositions?

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I had decided to retake the images for this assignment in a less “safe” location once I had tried to get a better idea of what I wanted. Unfortunately I waited too long and found myself in lockdown due to covid -19 and unable to go out at all.
Going back to the feedback from my tutor and trying to find a solution to not being able to take the images at the current time, I decided to go back to an area in the research point where I had paused a video to answer the door and unintentionally created a Decisive Moment. The feedback comment from my Tutor for this was:
“Your screengrab is a perfect example of a DM. Imagine you had a stream of visitors ringing your doorbell while watching ‘L’Amour de Tout Court’. Each time, slightly irritated, you have to pause the film and you take a screengrab. At the end of the film you have your assignment”
This sounded like a really interesting project to try! I doubt there will be a team of people ringing my door bell during lock down but to get round this I will leave the video on a loop on a separate computer screen and every time I have to move away from it I will pause without looking at the screen and then take a screen grab.
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